This chapter effortlessly demonstrates the character growth of Rismyn since his time at Launa. Of course Mazira contributes a lot to Rismyn's growth, but she could barely restrain him from aggression, especially in the face of someone like Dreder (the dude just is always asking for it). Just think about what he would have done in a situation like this when he had first arrived from the Wilds! A truth resident here is that our community surrounding forms is in deep ways, even deeper (and faster) than we sometimes realize.
Excited to see what ways Dreder might find redemption as well, even though I still kinda want Rismyn to punch him one more time. Maybe I need to spend more time in Launa.
Thank you for the feedback! I was really nervous releasing this chapter, but I'm glad to see my intent came through! Foil characters are fun to write, and their purpose is to highlight the strengths and weaknesses of the main character. I'm glad Dreder is doing his job, even if he does really need a good on-screen punch in the face lol!
Dreder is definitely doing his job lol. Also, when I see the email notifications about new chapters now, I get super stoked and can hardly wait to sit down to listen/read!
This chapter effortlessly demonstrates the character growth of Rismyn since his time at Launa. Of course Mazira contributes a lot to Rismyn's growth, but she could barely restrain him from aggression, especially in the face of someone like Dreder (the dude just is always asking for it). Just think about what he would have done in a situation like this when he had first arrived from the Wilds! A truth resident here is that our community surrounding forms is in deep ways, even deeper (and faster) than we sometimes realize.
Excited to see what ways Dreder might find redemption as well, even though I still kinda want Rismyn to punch him one more time. Maybe I need to spend more time in Launa.
Thank you for the feedback! I was really nervous releasing this chapter, but I'm glad to see my intent came through! Foil characters are fun to write, and their purpose is to highlight the strengths and weaknesses of the main character. I'm glad Dreder is doing his job, even if he does really need a good on-screen punch in the face lol!
Dreder is definitely doing his job lol. Also, when I see the email notifications about new chapters now, I get super stoked and can hardly wait to sit down to listen/read!