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Bekah Nelson's avatar

I read the author's note at the beginning of this and went, "Ohhh noooo..." and then proceeded to do the same thing throughout the chapter. So painful. Toloruel is legitimately awful, and to think that this is the first of three horrible incidents makes me so nervous...

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Sarah Danielle's avatar

I’ll be honest I’ve been watching your hearts and comments creep closer and closer to this trio of chapters with great trepidation 😅 They are painful, but once you get past them, nothing else is quite as bleak.

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Bekah Nelson's avatar

Hahaha, I can understand the trepidation. You write very well!

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Jesse Vladimirov's avatar

The only thing more torturous than a snake-headed whip is having to read this in installments! A book would be sweet relief. Alas, if I am to be tortured, I’d choose this.

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Sarah Danielle's avatar

Aww, that's very kind of you! I am so glad you're enjoying the story.

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